Awesome.
Now review my piece of work for CLAWK DAY. =)
Awesome.
Now review my piece of work for CLAWK DAY. =)
It was good!
But I really wished it still had the value from the first one. But still, it was excellent in my opinion!
Oh hey, in case you wanted to know, I voted 5 on it, it was great.
Also, how much I increased it, I can show you.
3.15 / 5.00 (+ 0.0098)
Good work mate!
The major differences were to show an evolution for me.
Good, but that song is OVER-USED.
Yeah, this was a great stick animation, the animation was smooth and the way you synced the song was terrific!
I loved the fact you added the faces, because mostly a majority of people don't even bother to do it/
Just a problem with it, that song, oh god, I've heard it in so many flashes it makes me ache, please for the sake of being original, just try to pick songs that aren't over-used next time, examples? Well, you can think some on your own, I know you have a smart noggin.
Thanks I said earlier to someone else, I will try use songs which aren't over-used next time, songs which maybe hardly have been heard
Thank you :)
Wow, impressive for your third flash.
This was really good, the beginning was good and some of the short battle scenes were done fairly well. Although for my opinion, I found the storyline a bit weak, It's like I've seen these so many times, something bad happens, war is struck, some sad ending happens, the end, kinda like that. But besides that, it was WELL DONE.
Congratulations, you've surprised me, although I'm not an animator, maybe I could learn from you.
Also, on another note, the graphics were graphic intense, I enjoy them, also a question, were all does drawings your own (example: the artillery, the soldiers)or did you trace them?
Thanks.
Lost-Wisdom
I didn't Trace anything.
Haha, it made me chuckle at least.
Well, since this flash was a loop (noticed it when it stopped for a bit and when at the beginning again), well let's talk about the flash, well it seems that you don't take fondly at the Wii as much, I agree with you, I don't like Wii, reason? I don't have it. Hehe.
Thank god you changed some of the scenes when it changes, because I thought after the first scene it would loop back to the same thing, and that is just repeating stuff, and doesn't give out a good score.
But you didn't you changed each scene so they won't be similar, well only a little bit, your put some fades and blurs, no there was NO CHANGE to the person who was hating on the Wii, I really wish you changed the animations to each scene.
Well, otherwise, it was good, the graphics were fairly okay, but passable.
Good work, I will see more from you.
The Fray- How to save a life.
That's the song you picked to create this song right? What a great choice, I loved that song, and now someone parodied it, which is even better. I love you for this, really.
That was sweet!
Wow, that was really great, and the way you continued the story was really, really, swell!
I really wished they continued more to the series but since they had a low-budget, I guess they couldn't *cries*
But hey! This was great, and I await the next part, it's been a year now, and nothing yet, don't abandon this!
Ha ha ha, haha.
Wow, oh god. It never ends, BUT I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING!
Pretty bland.
I didn't know what to write on this review, It just seemed that it isn't even worthy to make a review actually.
But since I'm making one right now, I guess I'll finish it briefly.
Pros
-Animation is slightly OKAY
-Tweening is slightly awful/okay
-Okay humor, I guess.
Cons
-No storyline at all
-Wheres the damn pre-loader?
-Probably didn't try hard to make this movie, no effort.
The Cons list can go on and on, but I'll stop on this.
Still, a decent effort, just try harder on your next animations, alright?
Lost-Wisdom
I am sure I put more effort than you actually could ever say. >=(
[Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery. Today is a gift. Thats why we call it the present.] "Music expresses on what cannot be said and on which it is impossible to be silent"
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